Tuesday, April 11, 2006

one of my first efforts...



''karma''



There’s an uprising,
somewhere, deep inside my heart
I’m thankful to the force,
which drew us apart.

I’m far away, from that cold blood
which runs in your veins,
from a guilty heart
and a conscience full of stains

Oh, I knew...
every time that you lied, I knew.
That moment on,
only the hatred in my heart grew

now I’m pointing my finger
at your worthless mind
when you couldn’t see
tears of the saddest kind.

I laugh at you now,
you're alone, all alone
and I’m watching the hell around you,
you'll mourn.

Every tear
which rolled down my cheek,
will take revenge;
I’m just not that weak.

I can’t help but recollect
False promises, which you made
Leaving them all around me
Memories can never fade…

Those millions of times
you stabbed me with your knife
my heart cried red blood
I cried out for life

Now the cold steel edge
has turned your side
the water is high
and I’m with the tide

You've lost your battle,
with the love for you I had
you proved to be evil,
you proved to be bad

The world
hasn't seen me laugh more than this
here's a token of hatred for you,
a cold, cold kiss

A kiss of goodbye,
a whisper telling you away
for every moment of torture,
I’m sorry, but you'll pay

Run along
with your dirty heart and tricky mind
I’m laughing at you,
till your destiny, you find.


-
Aarthi




6 comments:

Anonymous said...

tht was really nice work..
it was an inner voice which u brought out through ur pen on paper..
Pranav Jayade
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taalp3@yahoo.co.in
Nashik

SK said...

my goodness so much of hatred.. [:O]

aarthi kannan said...

leave your names you cowards !!!!

SK said...

whats in a name? what if i'm John, What if Salim..what if Ram, what if Jhandu baam!!![:D]

PS: visited your blog after a long time so delay in reply[:D]

aarthi kannan said...

ok SK. i dont care if youre a tom or a harry, but sure looks like youre a dick
if you have some appreciation or criticism to offer reagrding my posts be here, other wise seriously..this is a no-nonsense place

nissim nabar said...

ppl can appreciate a love poem alright...it is this kind of an emotion that they cannot handle being expressed.
hatred is as strong an emotion as love...i can relate to the emotion of this poem.
Keep writing.